I hated it so much it made me want to punch something.
...quality edgelord cringe.

The HORROR! Slowly became one of them...

this is a rant from someone who doesn't understand what you are trying to convey with this music video. The actual submission is well worth 5 stars, technically, this is amazing. I loved it. But do I understand it?
Truly, I don't. Maybe it's because i'm thinking too much, maybe it's because I've never felt the way you do. Maybe I lack the experience or something else. I don't know.

But to me, little stranger without any knowledge of your life that I am, this is confusing.
From whose point of view am I supposed to look from? How am I supposed to intepret this?
If I take it from the guy's side, this look like any random couple's issues with trust and cheating. But then it looks as if he realize the error of his way and try to chase after the girl. then they... split up? like another guy and another girl with the same problem appear and it turn into a space-chase. (That's where I get lost, actually. especially when two guy, that were probably the same perso, bump into each other, but the girl is only one since space girl changes into the normal girl.) And then I wonder... Is she leaving him because he cheated more than once, or because both her lover met each other the very moment she blamed the first for cheating on her?

Then I tried to see this from the girl's point of view. and it's even more messed up for me.
First, she's leaving him. that's the very first scene. Then we discover it might be because he is too 'volatile'... he cheats on her, yeah. With mermaids, sirens(harpy). Like I said, up to that part I can clearly see the message, the metaphor and all. It is quite clear.
Then we change scene. she become self-sufficient, she ascend beyond her need of a manipulative man. That's great. Really it is. She's becoming strong, she can fly to a whole new world (or universe, if you will). She looks really sad doing so, however. But the guy still chases her, and her only. to outer space and beyond. she literaly becomes a God and he still chases her in a miserable space rocket. How am I supposed to STAY on the girl's side when seeing that? He then proceed to RUN IN SPACE. W all know how futile this is, and i'm pretty sure the guy knows as well. Yet, he still does it. he tries.
But then I remember. Hey, it's not the same guy as before. And to prove it, here he is bumping into the first guy like the first time I watched this video. And she disappear into the horizon because... she drowned? Well she clearly sank to the bottom of the sea with the ship she decided to be back on while the two guys just look at each other blankly and then to the horizon, imagining the girl being all innocent. Wait, I was supposed to be on the girl's side this time.

I seriously don't understand what you were trying to say with this video. I feel like the scenes are all in the wrong order or something. Maybe i'm just stupid or insensitive. I don't know. and not knowing why is irritating... infuriating. I know this is silly.

Why is there 2 guy and only 1 girl? Why does she get to change and both guy end up alone when they appeared to try to change or actively chased after the girl.

Or maybe I am right. the girl is a lying bitch and killed herself because one of the guy looked at other girls. She probably said : let's go our separate way for a while. and then teased some random guy(the astronaut) while on her self-proclaimed path to goodness. and then, when both guys met, she drowned herself in a metaphorical ship that she, herself, sank to the bottom of the sea.

The first guy agreed to her 'separate ways' thing and then she got jealous, which is why she teased the second guy.
The second guy was truly attracted to the girl and wanted to go beyond simple friendship. and then learned she was in a relationship with the first guy.
They both calmly tried to talk it over but the girl didn't listen and when they didnt know what else to do, and since they didnt seem to want to fight over the girl, she died.
it's not a look of innocence she had, but naivety and idiocy.

Yeah... I'd rather go with my first theory where everything is wrong and make no sense... I don't really like the idea of a girl playing stupid and then killing herself because two guy didnt play by her rules.

Unless... you could shed some light on my confusion? I mean, theories are fine and all but if you know the actual message here, please tell me. I'm starting to get really frustrated for no logical reason here.

I got 1:02 on second run. first was 3:27.
See if you can make a full game with this concept. "I Wanna be the Ant" or something?

Where's my pack of gummy bear?!

it's too late to save this. I dunno how you made it to FP TODAY. I got a new computer and reformated twice since I last played your game. yet I still have my savegame WHICH KEEPS ASKING ME TO SAVE LOCALLY. I always clicked DENY but it still somehow use a savefile that's nowhere near my computer.
I'm never turning off my adblocker for these kind of game. Losing one was enough, thank you very much.

I dont care what you changed since a year and a half, the music is still way too loud, the gameplay is boring and glitched all over the place, it ask to save something on my computer BUT A NEW COMPUTER WITHOUT SYNC STILL USE A SAVEFIL SOMEHOW. your ads dont even work without adblock which elads me to believe I wasn't crazy : something is real fishy about your submission. huge perfomance issues as well.

what even did you change anyway? doesn't look any better to me.

Your music and her voice go so well together. It gives me the shivers.
Beautiful piece.
Might just be me/my headphones, but her voice seems low compared to the music. Can still hear her, just a minor issue that most probably comes from my side.

Did you compose the music yourself? Where did you take inspiration?

the first few second made me think of Rozen Maiden. if it wasnt for the percussion, I could mistake this for Rozen Maiden OST.
Speaking of percussion, maybe it's just me or my sound setting, but they're too big for the tune and I can't enjoy the rest of it.
= (

You've progressed quite far since the last time. You seem to really enjoy voice acting.

Keep up the good work!

pretty sure her name is Caulifla (for Cauliflower, all saiyan have a pun name with veggies... and Bulma's family is named after undergarments. Love this serie)