Sreith's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Duo bot plz]

shouldn't ashe's hair be a bit longer?

This is too darned cute.

NekoStar responds:

Thanks! I prefer girls with short hair personally, so I used her hair from her 'Amethyst' Skin, but I've always liked her outfit in the 'default' skin. So... I figured I could get away with some artistic licensing. XD

[Grown up]

dunno if it was you or someone else, but someone put this pic on 9gag.

on another note, love it! it just need colors now.

IrinaEihwaz responds:

I didn't. Someone else, I think.
I like to keep my comics in black and white ^^
Thank you for your feedback.

And also, could you please note me a link with comics on 9gag?

[Tatsuki Arisawa Compilation]

I just wanted to point out that the girl with "Valkyrja" shirt and the hat is actually Nanjou Kisara from Shijou Saikyou no Deshi Kenichi, by Syun Matsuena. You either mixed your references or meant to put her there, that, I don't know (Didn't read your manga yet.)

that's it. it was bothering me, I had to tell.

gairon responds:

...... that was her Halloween costume.

[Noticed]

my only concern is with the eyes staying at the same height. As if her face never moved. kinda creeps me out actually. I mean, she does turn her head, so why doesnt the face follow? The small lowering of both eyelids was good thinking, but the eyes themselves should follow the rest of the head, just as the hair and ribbon does. it's almost a 45 degree angle, right? The more I look at it, the more confused I get about her eyes.
Hair feels a bit rigid, I'm not complaining, there is nothing for me to point out there.
Why is she.... mad? (before "noticing") Please make a story!
I like how the crease in her clothes follow with the movement. Same for the ribbon. It's awesome. I can only praise you about the blue cord. Even though it took me a short while before noticing the cord...

your skills have improved by a LOT since I started following you in early 2012. I miss Melandy a bit though... I enjoy watching you evolve.

This is from an amateur artist but... Why is the shadow over both the shoulders and ponytail, but on the side and below for everywhere else? I get the head's shadow projection, but unless the light is coming from just above her bangs, isn't both shoulder a bit too much?

bocodamondo responds:

its not supposed to be a complete head turn, just a slight movement which is why the eyes dont change too much...perhaps i moved the ponytail a bit too much ^^
she is sitting in a bus stop place, and that has a roof thingy, which is why the shading is like that...come to think of it, i should make the entire ponytail bowtie and back of the hair dark too. that would make it look better ^^

thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it ^^
P.Si have ton of drawings ideas with melandy, i didn't forgot about her ;)

[Po]

it's amazing... seriously!
Your "quick pose drawing practice" often look WAAAAAYYYY better than your regular stuff. It's amazing you brush it off as "nothing special" or "just practice"...

PRACTICE ALL THE TIME! Your stuff look better this way!
5/5
Big fan

bocodamondo responds:

well..maybe its because i take risks in practice artworks, like drawing a pose or prespective for the first time without being to scared it will look off propotioned or down right wrong/ugly, where in my regular stuff i keep it safe...that might be a reason

[Demon Dominatrix]

Melandy's rival?

bocodamondo responds:

kinda funny actually, i was thinking about this, since its like the opposite of melandy and all....il think about it.

[Twilight Sparkle]

Yes i noticed. I even got in a fight with a friend. saying "it's Panty". he was all like "No it's TS!" so yeah... XD

Nice drawing! Hair texture looks a bit off. Why can't she wear something more.. sexy? or more fancy? I mean.. she's supposed to SPARKLE! =P

bocodamondo responds:

eh. after what ive seen i can assume that twilight is a bookworm. thats why i wanted to give her "nerdy" clothes ^^

[Makoto Buys a T-shirt]

Again, i like the personnal touch you put in every drawing you make.
And I also like the shirt! Very much so! =P

DeliciousOrange responds:

It gets right to the point, doesn't it?

[Solo Queue]

-42 and demoted.
+42 and nothing.
Yeah we all love this game. We all love their updates and their new stuff.

ps. Ashe looks better drawn by you.

DeliciousOrange responds:

Thanks, laddering can be frustrating at times.