JASON!
JASON!
cant...
stop..
laughing!!!
OMG THIS IS PURE GOLD! NO, IT'S DAMN PLATINUM!
PS: the play button is the skull icon on the left. for those without a mouse-over logic =P
one word :
......What?
That old woman sounds so evil...
At first, i was hesitant. Video like this usually end up being.... disapointed or disgusting. Or plain stupid.
I decided to give this one a try and I was not disappointed. On the contrary, it made me laugh for the first time today. I was in a bad mood, you turned it into a good mood. Thanks man.
I hope you get better at drawing your stuff. I can clearly feel your enthusiasm and you seem to like drawing furry stuff. I'm not much of an artist, I'm not a fan of furry and of course i'm nowhere near capable of providing good advices on the subject.
However...
You Can Go Far. Keep at it. If it's your dream, don't let go.
thats it?
fuck you, i want more! GIVE ME MORE!
ROTMK? ....nice attempt anyway.
If not, good job. I feel like you could discard the "bitch" and "fapping" and it would be a better animation.
And I agree with Galan0, you should have waited until the "madness" sorta event ended. You'd got more point, fame, and more viewer would take their time to watch this.
first thing first. that alarm clock was way too real. it made my heart skip 3 beat. I thought i'd wake up from my fucked up realistic dream and got scared shitless. I hate you for that. this isnt a joke.
Colors were bland. I cant call this a cartoon at all. The expressions and motions weren't carried correctly. Anatomicaly impossible movement and position, awkward reactions. None of this looked realistic, at all. It wasnt even caricatural to me.
I don't quite get the story or the relation to this NATA subject. I don't get anything at all. What is happening? Why? Is the world disappearing because of him or because he cant see it? Is this from the lost sock/lost item myth? Alien zapping? What is happening? I'm confused.
I am the viewer. I deserve entertainement. Easy to chew, easy to screw... The alarm clock was promising, and then, forgive me for my next-to-come absolutely stupid comment, but it was... trash. Yes. I feel betrayed. Badly portrayed glassman threw his coffee all over as if he has no care in the world. Why? How? From my, the average, under-developped intellectual, middle cast youth this made no sense at all. I can't laugh, i can't make bad jokes about this. I can't cry, i can't derive any drama. I can't smirk, i can't feel anything from this animation.
I mean, i've seen lots of very bad animation here on newgrounds. Like, so bad I am ashamed to know they existed. Yet I could understand the... "plot". While here, for a finalist, i was expecting something near amazing, something good. out of the ordinary. Something I could develop my own fantasy, rant all day about or just enjoy. I felt betrayed. Did you really do this? Are you positively sure you want to go on having this as your entry?
It's different. Yes. You are proud of your results, yes. Art-wise this is very interesting (minus the weird anatomy) and something I don't see everyday. I give you that.
But where's the fun? intrigue? Mystery? Plot? Reasoning? Comedy? Drama? You ought to have at least ONE "genre". But which is it? I can't say, I can't see. I'm simply lost. I have no idea what to say more. How should I rate this? And why? What was that all about?
-The average middle cast youth
I understand what you're saying and agree with it. This is not my best movie, and I sort of lost my way making it. It probably has a higher score than it deserves. But the one line I disagree with is this: "for a finalist, i was expecting something near amazing, something good."
I have been animating nonstop for six months, and I'm sorry, but I am worn out. This video is not why I am a finalist. I am a finalist because I made it through five other months of this grueling work. If you want to see why I am a finalist, you have to look at all the videos I made for NATA as a set. They are by no means perfect, but all the same, I think maybe you need to put it all in perspective.
what the hell is this. GIMME BACK MY SOUL!
Big Shot? Big Shot...
Age 37, Male
Canada
Joined on 9/22/10